assesment outline

OUTLINE 1: assessment

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Echo:

Sentence #1: Topic Sentence (TS)

              Example TS:  this site was my second choice

Sentence #2: 1st Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

              Example SD1:  why did I get second choice?

Sentence #3: Commentary (CM) on the SD

              Example CM1: no one called me back from B&G

Sentence #4: Another commentary (CM) on the SD

              Example CM2:  it was getting late and I needed to start now if I was to get it done on time

Sentence #5: 2nd Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

              Example SD2: what did I do?

Sentence #6: Commentary (CM) on the 2nd SD

Example CM1:  I looked on my list for my 3 favorites and saw Westerly shelter

Sentence #7: Another commentary (CM) on the 2nd SD

              Example CM2:  they immediately got me scheduled on the first call up

Sentence #8: 3rd Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

              Example SD3:  what made your site so interesting?

Sentence #9: Commentary (CM) on 3rd SD

              Example CM1:  the place had a very spacious plaza, but the corridors and rooms were somewhat narrow

Sentence #10: Commentary (CM) on 3rd SD

              Example CM2: the people are very nice and in a good mood

Sentence #11: Concluding Sentence (CS)

              Example CS:  I’m kind of glad I chose this one