assesment outline 7

OUTLINE assessment:7

Bell:

Echo:

Sentence #1: Topic Sentence (TS)

              Example TS: 7. How has this experience changed you?

Sentence #2: 1st Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

              Example SD1:  I have become less picky about my tasks

Sentence #3: Commentary (CM) on the SD

              Example CM1:  I have just done seven session of working for free! So has everyone else

Sentence #4: Another commentary (CM) on the SD

              Example CM2:   I have learned to be eager to do things, even if they don’t pay. Just for the experience

Sentence #5: 2nd Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

              Example SD2:  I am more confident with doing my duty

Sentence #6: Commentary (CM) on the 2nd SD

Example CM1:  when I started out, I usually sticked to the basics in my work

Sentence #7: Another commentary (CM) on the 2nd SD

              Example CM2:  now I go for the gold, the best I can be!

Sentence #8: 3rd Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

              Example SD3:  every time I go somewhere, I meet new people

Sentence #9: Commentary (CM) on 3rd SD

              Example CM1:  I’m working on my eye contact and not to act so shy

Sentence #10: Commentary (CM) on 3rd SD

              Example CM2:  I also get to meet people as passionate about animals as I am

Sentence #11: Concluding Sentence (CS)

              Example CS:  I’m glad I chose this place