When I think of my most sturdiest ‘friend ship’, my good friend Jordan comes to mind. We’ve been together since kindergarten, figuring out simple arithmetic, discovering how we get rain, finding happiness through sharing and doing what is right, basically enjoying school each and every day. However, our relationship started out when we started talking about our siblings. Then we started to talk about our favorite cartoons and movies. Jordan and I eventually realized that we had a lot in common. The thing we most had in common was the fact that we loved to joke. When we were together, we were rarely serious. Even when I was sad, Jordan would help me up with a joke that I would laugh at for the whole day. We basically were two supportive friends. When I think about our friendship, it reminds me of milk and cookies. We both taste great combined. It means that we have a little bit of each other inside us and that we are happiest together. I am very glad I met Jordan, otherwise there would just be a lone ‘cookie’ in the world…
OMG. I love your milk and cookies similie! it is so true! One thing I think would make your paragraph better, is to change 'taste' to 'are' because I wouldn't be able to imagine eating a Jordan and E sandwich. (I also love your taffy sentence! Its terrific!) Keep up the good work E! (:
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ReplyDeleteThis was a great paragraph and I truly enjoyed reading about you and Jordan, and all that you have in common. In the sentence, “We both taste great combined.” I became very confused and it caused me to stop reading and to think about what I had just read when I got over it I read on and noticed that you explained that sentence. I think that if you somehow merge those two sentences it will make an excellent sentence. Overall great job and I cant wait to read the rest.
Harry