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Wednesday, April 13, 2011

essay 12 outline


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Sentence #1: Topic Sentence (TS)
              Example TS:  me and jordan are very close friends

Sentence #2: 1st Supporting Detail (SD), with transition
              Example SD1:  we’ve been together since kindergarten

Sentence #3: Commentary (CM) on the SD
              Example CM1:  when we both started telling stories about our siblings, we found some similarities


Sentence #4: Another commentary (CM) on the SD
              Example CM2:  we also liked the same cartoons when we were little

Sentence #5: 2nd Supporting Detail (SD), with transition
              Example SD2:  we really like to talk about funny things


Sentence #6: Commentary (CM) on the 2nd SD
Example CM1: when were together, were rarely serious


Sentence #7: Another commentary (CM) on the 2nd SD
              Example CM2:  he really cheers me up when I feel down

Sentence #8: 3rd Supporting Detail (SD), with transition
              Example SD3:  we are like cookies and milk


Sentence #9: Commentary (CM) on 3rd SD
              Example CM1:  we both taste good when were together

Sentence #10: Commentary (CM) on 3rd SD
              Example CM2:  we have a little of each other inside us

Sentence #11: Concluding Sentence (CS)
              Example CS:  I’m glad to be his friend

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