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Hooker: has parent been crack shot? Journeyman in 3 states?

Comm.: There is always something secret about your parents

Comm.: just when you think you know everything about your parents,they reveal something new

Comm: sometimes they need a situation to remind them of these things or to share them

Thesis with Bell word: unknown,

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Thesis: One-shot finch

Echo words:

SD: What happened?

CM: this situation brought up something that Atticus didn’t want his children to know

CM: dog was mad, Atticus shot it

CM: people mumbled about it, kids amazed

Q: expertness, talent

SD: Jem and scouts reactions

CM: amazed, curios to find more

CM:

Q: intrigued, inquisitive

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Thesis: my dad was a pipe

Echo words: interrogation,

SD: how did I find out?

CM: dad had lumps on his shoulder I asked , he said he set up sprinkler systems

CM: found out when wrestling with him

CM:

SD: What did he do to get bump?

CM: worked in stores and factory building and chemical plants

CM: fixed systems to squirt water when smoke was detected

CM: Massachusetts, Vermont, Rhode Island, Connecticut he worked

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Hooker: parents aren’t as they seem…

Comm.: the more time you spend with them, the more you will learn about them

Comm.: Go ask your parents learn something new

Thesis with Bell word: discover,

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