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Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Ms. Peggy

The Mysterious Ms.Peggy




              An Essay on my Neighbor
        Strange, it is an interesting word. It could be a good thing, could be a bad thing. Strange could mean a taste. It could be something odd you see. If  you use strange to describe someone, it usually means something that that person does that isn't your 'normal'. However, it doesn't always mean they are creepy. strange can also mean they are interesting. The person who I think fits Interesting is Ms. Peggy. 

    My neighbor Ms. Peggy is a very interesting person. She may seem odd, until you meet her. So let me tell a little bit about her so you can recognize her. Ms. Peggy is a small woman that is about 50 years old. She also has a lot of blond hair in a somewhat messy piled form. I've known Ms. Peggy for a long time and I usually see her walking. Besides for exercise she walks to get her mail and other things around town instead of driving. When she's not walking or driving somewhere out of walking distance, she is probably in her garage on a lawn chair reading a newspaper. When she is outside, she sees many kinds of animals.I say this because she has so many animal stories to tell when i come over with my sister. like deer or turkeys or even woodpeckers on her roof. Speaking of going over to her house, Ms. Peggy rarely gets visits from anyone. I don't think she has any family besides her two neighbors. Even so, ms. Peggy is a very happy and healthy person. She also enjoys going to the local vegetable stand and buying corn to roast. She even eats THAT outside.To conclude, i believe ms. Peggy is 'strange'
 but in a good way. I hope you get to meet someone like her some day...

   There are many odd people in the world, you may know some. This word can mean many things. It can say you dislike someone, or  are facinated by their distinct characteristics. What I wrote about is someone in my life who is diffrent than the others in a special sort of way. 'Stange', it IS an interesting word...
    

2 comments:

  1. I like your work overall, but I think there are some capitalization errors through out the paragraph you need to fix. Other than that, i enjoyed reading your paragraph!

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  2. Great job emmanuel This essay was fantastic to read. Reading this felt like i was there. Although in this sentance ,"like deer or turkeys and woodpeckers in her roof." I kind off got lost i think that sentance could use some revising. Other than that there was just a few capitalization errors. Great job Emmanuel.

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