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Bell:

Echo:

Sentence #1: Topic Sentence (TS)

              Example TS: These thing have happened before in the story

Sentence #2: 1st Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

§                    Example SD1: many times the social status has effected how people see others

 Sentence #3: Commentary (CM) on the SD

·                    Example CM1: aunt Alexandra has often told scout she cannot play with certain people.

Sentence #4: Another commentary (CM) on the SD

·                    Example CM2: many in the white community dislike the blacks in it. Lulu did not like jem and scout coming to their black church

Sentence #5: 2nd Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

·              Example SD2: There are many refrences to mocking birds and how they are a sin to kill

Sentence #6: Commentary (CM) on the 2nd SD

Example CM1: Tom Robinson is considered innocent like a bird. Gave help to others like bird gives song

Sentence #7: Another commentary (CM) on the 2nd SD

              Example CM2: Jem and scout mimic towns people with snowmen and little plays with dill

Sentence #8: 3rd Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

              Example SD3: Hypocrisy has appeared a few times in the book

Sentence #9: Commentary (CM) on 3rd SD

              Example CM1:  Even when the jury believed Atticus’s side at the trial, they still voted against Tom

Sentence #10: Commentary (CM) on 3rd SD

              Example CM2:  when scouts class talked about Hitler, none of the adults saw that they were doing the same thing Hitler was doing

Sentence #11: Concluding Sentence (CS)

              Example CS:  it’s interesting how many themes seem to repeat

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Bell:

Echo:

Sentence #1: Topic Sentence (TS)

              Example TS: the red couch is a place I keep returning to

Sentence #2: 1st Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

              Example SD1: I go there when I am mad or very sad

Sentence #3: Commentary (CM) on the SD

              Example CM1: when I was little I changed moods pretty quick

Sentence #4: Another commentary (CM) on the SD

              Example CM2: but whenever I looked outside, it reminded me life still goes on.

Sentence #5: 2nd Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

              Example SD2:  it is a nice place to relax after stressful days

Sentence #6: Commentary (CM) on the 2nd SD

Example CM1: like a free spa, i bring a book and some tea on some weekends

Sentence #7: Another commentary (CM) on the 2nd SD

              Example CM2: even so, sometimes I have to wake up so I can finish my HW

Sentence #8: 3rd Supporting Detail (SD), with transition

              Example SD3:  lastly, I love to study my bible there early in the mornings

Sentence #9: Commentary (CM) on 3rd SD

              Example CM1: I feel really connected there

Sentence #10: Commentary (CM) on 3rd SD

              Example CM2: I will miss that place when I move this summer

Sentence #11: Concluding Sentence (CS)

              Example CS: I will remember those memories